Here's page 18.5.
Also something important. I received like a billion suggestions and obviously I can't realize all of them in this chapter.
(Only the nosehook rimjob at the end of the chapter is set in stone since I already modeled the nosehook.)
So guess what, it's gonna be voting time! I will collect all of the suggestions (and pray I don't forget any) and let you vote what will happen in the next couple of pages.
This will also probably mean that the scene with the brutes will slide into chapter 3 since this one is already taking way longer than I planned.
Note for those of you who have to translate into their native language: The dialogue of this page will be between page 18 and 19 in the text file which you will in the attachments as usually!
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