It was requested by ethereal so here we go. Also I want to rerender page 11 because I didn't like a few things about it.

This is a preview of page 11 which I will post tomorrow.
I don't like how there's not enough light in the upper part of the room which makes her hair appear really dark and hides the contours of the machine.
I also will move the sword a bit. The handle covering up her hand is just poor composition.