Noranora9~12
Added 2019-06-01 12:50:35 +0000 UTCThis comic is fully translated by me. So Iโm afraid that there will be mistakes.
Please feel free to comment and feel free to correct the translation
Sorry forgot page9! Fixed it๐ช
Comments
Amazing work, NOMIFUKI. :) Apart from what others have corrected, I think punctuation could be fixed. (E.g. Avoid using two full stops "..!" and instead use three or none. "...!") I'm really loving the comic's story and its art, and your personal translations have gone way beyond being good readable English and are reaching a level where they are almost perfect English. You've progressed very well. :3
Meowcino
2019-06-11 10:05:55 +0000 UTCThank you Hr.Seehund-san!!!!๐ฅบโจโจโจโจ
NOMIFUKI
2019-06-03 03:01:39 +0000 UTCBest of luck man, loving each page of this comic!
Nekoitoi
2019-06-03 03:00:53 +0000 UTCTHANK YOU Valravn-san๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญsoooooo happy to hear that. I am so happy that you like them ..!!โจโจโจ
NOMIFUKI
2019-06-02 14:50:00 +0000 UTCI loved this lol, I laughed and loved how very sexy it was. And the translation isn't bad either! Most translations in comics are terrible but yours feels so fluid. Kinda like English was your first language so great job!
Valravn
2019-06-02 14:17:42 +0000 UTCOh thank you nekoitoi-san...!! Lots of effort....!!!๐ฅบ๐ฅบ๐ฅบ๐ฅบ๐ฅบ๐ฅบ๐ฅบthank you...!!!!
NOMIFUKI
2019-06-02 09:18:30 +0000 UTCI love those two! Drawings are sooo good and love the expressions n fur:3
2019-06-02 06:39:02 +0000 UTCpage 9 I think it would sound a bit better if Kuro was saying, "Quit being so cocky.." Maybe, drop shiro saying "Duh" As it implies, he obviously knows kuro is topping. Maybe it should say, "You already came this morning" instead of "cummed" page 11: I think it would sound more natural if Shiro said, "Kuro, Turn around" as turn back sounds odd.
Nekoitoi
2019-06-02 03:30:29 +0000 UTCใใใใจใใใณใใฉใใฏในใใ๏ผ๏ผ๏ผ
NOMIFUKI
2019-06-02 00:33:47 +0000 UTCThank you !! Itโs fun time!!!
NOMIFUKI
2019-06-02 00:33:35 +0000 UTCใใใใ!! ใกใใใฃๅคงๅฅฝใใ
Panfoxu
2019-06-02 00:28:26 +0000 UTCLooks like fun!
Zilch Woofs
2019-06-02 00:24:48 +0000 UTCOooooohhh thatโs sooooo cooool!,,!!,!!!! Definitely wrote it down on my title list!!
NOMIFUKI
2019-06-02 00:06:21 +0000 UTCThank you lollie-san!!! I fixed it!!!
NOMIFUKI
2019-06-02 00:05:21 +0000 UTCThank you for telling me! Fixed it!,
NOMIFUKI
2019-06-02 00:04:16 +0000 UTCAaahhh thank you!! Fixed it!! Why am I so bad at counting pages!!!
NOMIFUKI
2019-06-01 23:58:06 +0000 UTCpage 9 seems tiny sized and blurry to me.
2019-06-01 23:56:07 +0000 UTCThank youโบ๏ธ
NOMIFUKI
2019-06-01 23:41:03 +0000 UTCThank you!!!
NOMIFUKI
2019-06-01 23:40:54 +0000 UTCSexy Pose is lovely!!! ๐คค๐๐๐๐
Bubba Wolfuzz
2019-06-01 18:25:11 +0000 UTCNow we need Page 9 :)
Azaghal
2019-06-01 18:21:03 +0000 UTCQue intenso ๐๐๐๐ great job ๐๐
2019-06-01 18:00:33 +0000 UTCI love them.... You're so good with their expressions!!!!!
Ink
2019-06-01 16:50:30 +0000 UTCใชใขใญใ๏ผ This is really funny, and everything is well translated. The only thing I'd really change is: when Shiro says "Kuro, turn back!" He should say "Kuro, turn around!" Or "Turn around, Kuro!" It reads better. Still, great job!!!
Hr. Seehund
2019-06-01 15:51:49 +0000 UTCHey Nomi-san. If youโre still taking ideas for an English title for ใฎใใฎใ I was looking up Stray dogs and read about packs of strays. When stray dogs roam together itโs called โFree Ranging.โ Thought maybe it could be โFree Ranging Dogsโ or something along those lines in English? โFree Rangersโ โRoaming Straysโ Just throwing ideas around for you! ๐ค
Torakuma
2019-06-01 13:51:21 +0000 UTCOh yeah, I was so distracted by Kuro-kunโs Fluffy โ๏ธ balls I didnโt realize page 9 was missing. ๐ Iโm sure Nomi-san will fix and upload.
Torakuma
2019-06-01 13:40:17 +0000 UTCOh, this upload is missing page #9!
Lollie
2019-06-01 13:29:28 +0000 UTCThank you Torakumasan โบ๏ธโจโจ
NOMIFUKI
2019-06-01 13:11:40 +0000 UTCKuroโs fuzzy balls are โจ๐๐โจ
Torakuma
2019-06-01 13:11:10 +0000 UTC
