Valentine: Rejection Curse (WIP)
Added 2023-02-17 09:20:15 +0000 UTCSorry, this was meant to come out on Valentine but I couldnβt get enough privacy and find enough time to finish this until now. Tried something a bit different with this story, a bit of Yandere, let me know what you think! Iβll love to hear your comments!
Comments
She could, thatβs a possibility.
Arisa
2023-03-12 20:49:50 +0000 UTCI like good ending (sort of). Will she end UP pregnant?
Lord Lorac
2023-03-12 09:44:53 +0000 UTC100% agree with TashaTheWitchQueen. I love both type tho, a petite body like Yukina has its own charm, unlike bimbo type. Annnd, I know it's short story, but still sad that mind changing/control build-up is too short or simple. But I know you're doing your best. Don't worry too much.
NGLIG
2023-02-20 18:34:53 +0000 UTCAww, I think Yukina is really cute, her petite body type is different from the girls you usually draw Ari and I do like variety. Glad it worked out for her even at the frustration of Oguri. Nice work Ari! π (by the way it it looks like you misspelled βPlainβ as βPlaneβ)
TashaTheWitchQueen
2023-02-18 13:10:19 +0000 UTCYeah it says valintines on the second page so I'd assume it was earlier before that page.
Poggie
2023-02-17 21:49:53 +0000 UTCKinda wanna see a sequel page where mori gives oguri an invite to her wedding
Connor Caines-Mandeville
2023-02-17 15:40:31 +0000 UTCLoved it! Maybe it's irrelevant, but it's there a timeskip between the first page and the transformation? Oguri makes quite the change inbetween.
Zazkar
2023-02-17 14:53:36 +0000 UTCI was worried for a moment it would get sad but that was a nice happy ending. Thank you!
2023-02-17 12:45:16 +0000 UTCLove it :)
Poggie
2023-02-17 11:39:18 +0000 UTCLove when plans backfire. Makes the story better overall
Connor Caines-Mandeville
2023-02-17 10:01:29 +0000 UTC
