Quick Poll! π
Added 2025-07-24 18:37:28 +0000 UTCSince this is my very first story, Iβd really love your honest opinion:
π₯ How do you feel about the pacing of "Lost in Paradise" so far?
I genuinely appreciate everyone whoβs taken the time to read, support or even subscribe β means the world to me. β€οΈπ
Based on your feedback, Iβll definitely try to improve and adjust the pacing where needed.
Next part drops this Sunday
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Thanks so much for the feedback, really appreciate you taking the time to share your thoughts! π Iβll definitely try to take your input into account where I can always helps to hear what people enjoy and want more of. Means a lot!
RealLustStories
2025-07-26 08:39:34 +0000 UTCThanks so much for your thoughtful feedback I really appreciate it! π Youβre absolutely right: the focus is often heavily on the woman, and your point about adding more βedgingβ and showing why she stays is actually super valuable. Iβll definitely explore ways to describe the guyβs appeal more, whether itβs physical presence or the kind of charm that pulls her in. Also love the idea of giving the boyfriend or the other guy a bit more visual weight too, maybe even through images or subtle character highlights. Really appreciate you taking the time. Feedback like this helps me grow the project and improve the tension where it matters. π¬π₯
RealLustStories
2025-07-26 08:35:54 +0000 UTCLove the slow build! It could be somewhat circumvented if there was more edging there. To easier visualize why she remains. Like say the outline of his body and what makes her possibly attracted to him. When I read these stories, the only criticism I have is that it is usually too focused on the woman.. always the woman. But it is not wrong to include pictures of the boyfriend or the man rizzing the GF either. As a person who enjoys the corruption of a loving GF to a "cheating slut", allowing us to see the men too not only helps us understand her, but it also makes the story more believable. Men usually send more nude pictures on average than girls do. However, I understand that women are perhaps not the target demographic. This was just my opinion on how to make it better the way I could see it. Hope it helps.
BimboBlonde
2025-07-26 08:31:23 +0000 UTCIMO slow burn is the way to go. I think if she cools down for a bit either bc she realizes sheβs messing up some or her bf convinces her sheβs messing up that would be good. But she continues to talk to the guy and justifies it in her head as βheβs just a friendβ but continues to get seduced before eventually breaking
Omega6464
2025-07-24 21:22:17 +0000 UTC
